User blog comment:Pokemon-Trainer-Julia/Hello it's self-promotion time again/@comment-1344907-20150103203510/@comment-1344907-20150103211235

For the run-on sentences? The thing won't let me highlight and copy the story (for plagiarism reasons, I'm guessing?), so I guess I'll just point out a few by location in the first chapter: second paragraph, second sentence; fifth paragraph, third sentence; sixteenth paragraph, first sentence. (Might be more, but I'm getting tired of counting the paragraph numbers lol)