User blog comment:BulletRefutation/Millard High RP (Part 24)/@comment-24796995-20130325192450/@comment-3184885-20130326005103

(( no offence IceCream, but you might want to work on character development a bit more. A good villain needs to be more methodical with they're attacks. Also it seems a bit silly if she doesn't have a reason behind being evil and doing evil things. It's just being evil for the sake of being evil and that's not a good thing.))