User blog comment:Pokemon-Trainer-Julia/Hello it's self-promotion time again/@comment-1344907-20150103203510

I read some chapters. I like your writing style--it's very fluid and descriptive with a very nice variety of vocabulary, and the characterization is great. Reagan sounds like a nice kid; shame we don't get to see him much in this RP.

Only real criticisms I have are grammar-related. There are a few run-on sentences, and you don't need to capitalize the first letter of the word after the quotation marks unless it's a person's name.