User blog comment:Pokemon-Trainer-Julia/Hello it's self-promotion time again/@comment-1344907-20150103203510/@comment-1945898-20150103211813

That's alright. You pointed out a few, so now I know how to fix it. (Run-ons are nearly always a problem with me.)

When you say that I don't need to capitalize the first letter after quotation marks, what exactly do you mean? You mean like, in a sentence like this?

"Blah blah blah, listen to me," The fool said. "I am the one talkiing."